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Rumors of Light - Loki x Child Reader [2]

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Previously~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Not before his eyes, his sole blood heir would never be bound to anyone less than a god of equal power. One worthy to wed his sole offspring, that could rival their enemies as they glorified Asgard's might.

You were tied to him through blood and spirit, your father would always be there to guide and protect you no matter the task set before you both.

His glory and might destroyed all of your fears away as you looked upon your father lovingly.

His regal stance and words made your eyes began to well with tears as you looked on proudly. Ready to follow and fight for him until you reached the end of all realms.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~400 years later-Present~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Quickly you made your way as fast as your feet could carry you to Your fathers chambers. He would would lead you this day as you joined Asgard's realm as a royal. Sworn to protect and preserve this and all realms.

Your lone steps raced swiftly through the Palaces hall's, the heels of your shoes clacked loudly amongst the polished marble floors that echoed your desperate pace as you ran onwards and deeper into Asgard's kingdom.

Today was the day, at long last. The glorious day your Father had promised to start teaching you you in the way of the magic arts.

A day I had so long awaited for.

Though I may be next in line to the throne as my fathers heir, I had always felt inept within his presence. Yet that did nothing to distill my resolve as I still sought a way to prove myself to our people and my own lineage of this ever changing realm.

Still I had my own suspicions of how my suitors managed to disappear due to my fathers will. Yet I would not dare to bring it up to my father now for fear of his anger and wrath at my words.

He was loving, caring and protective of me. I knew I meant everything to him and he to me. Though if not given the proper respect Loki would snap as I now presumed any man would at any disgracing.

Would he ever let me go on, and stop his needless and yet relentless protectiveness over me.

Just as my thoughts finally calmed down as I finally regained my breathe I found myself standing before his massive golden doors.

The doors that lead the way to Loki's chambers, my fathers room.
I'm sorry this chapter is so short but we are working up to an epic installment where father Loki becomes extremely protective.

That is if my watchers so wish me to continue on.

This is a continuation of the Loki and Child x Reader one shot.

Any ideas or recommendations are welcomed! :la:

Comment please if you enjoyed!
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It's not a bad story, by any means! I'm very curious to see where this story goes, because it catches my attention every time I read it. The main issue I have is the lack of descriptions. Not too many paragraphs, and not a lot of detail is given in this story. It takes away from a plot that has a lot of potential, and having very short chapters with little exposition isn't very helpful when it comes to really bringing this story together.
The grammar is spot on, which is a wonderful thing to have, and the words used are quite well written. The biggest problem's the lack of detail and story unfolding in the brief chapters. Other than that, I'm very interested to see where this story goes. Good job!